Talk:Laya.farhangi/process/how to ride a bike?/@comment-46.100.178.102-20130505101517

Hello dear Laya, good job!

Here I have some comments.

I think in the first paragraph some "he"s are redundant. And the verbs aren`t agree with each other in the whole essay. Some of them are imperative verbs and  others are third person singular.

Good luck dear :)

 Arefe Maghsoudi