Talk:Rahele. Lotf/comparison and contrast/single or marriage!/@comment-204.93.60.142-20130513155817

Hello dear Mrs Lotf

That's a good topic and writing. But there's some grammatical errors in the second, the third and the paragraphs. For example in the sentence:  " you don't have undertaking to someone that is why you feel freedom and..." in the second paragraph I didn't get your meaning and in my opinion the sentence is ungrammatical. There are some errors in the following paragraphs.

Good luck My friend

Arefe Maghsoudi